Magical song!, Gave me goosebumps when the main lead kicked in, You sir is a genius, Please keep up the good work =]

The song definitely needs a bit of work, Try different types of synths or even add more to the same melody, Adding effects would help you a lot, try adding a cool effect in the mixer under Master called SoundGoodizer, keep it on A and just mess around with the knob to see what sound suits you :)